My Dream
我的梦想
Everyone has a lot of dreams. Some people want to be rich, dreaming of becoming millionairesovernight. Others want to be famous, dreaming of suddenly jumping to great fame. I have alot of dreams, too. When I was a young girl, I dreamed of becoming a scientist like Hua Luogenin future. However, I knew ve ry well that I could not succeed without painstaking efforts. So Istudied hard in the middle school and college in order to attain my goal.
After graduating from college, I found a job as a teacher. Although I was very busy withteaching, I never gave up my goal. I read a lot of books to get more knowledge. I madeexperiments to pr actise and apply what I had learnt from the books. Sometimes, I was sodeeply indulged in my research that I forgot my meals and time. Now I have made greatprogress. Several of my research papers have been published. The methods proposed in mypapers have been proven to be valuable for the solution of some problems. I am very happy. The ladder of becoming a scientist is still far ahead, but I have climbed the first rung anyway.
作文结构分析：
·Everybody has a lot of dreams
* Some people’s dr eams
* Other people’s dreams
* My dream
· How I realize my dream
* Study hard
* Work hard
* Achievements so far made
* A long way to go
作文内容分析：
本文为一篇记叙文。文中第一段为夹叙夹议，以general comment开头，引出“我的梦想”。第二段为作者为实现梦想所做的努力和取得的成果，最后一句“成为科学家的阶梯还遥遥在上，但我至少已攀登了第一级。”既是总结又是方向。此句摹仿了Jack London的散文“What Life Mean s to Me”中的一句精彩句子。
作文万能句型：
dream of 梦想……
jump to great fame 一举成名
be indulged in 沉缅于
propose v. 提出
ladde r n. 梯子
rung n. (梯子的)级
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