为什么你的作文里惊现大篇Run-on sentences？点进来学五招轻松解决

　　小热身：判断哪些句子是正确的，哪些是错误的？

　　“他薪水很丰厚，买得起很多奢侈品。”

　　1. He has a handsome salary can afford many luxuries.

　　2. He has a handsome salary, he can afford many luxuries.

　　3. He has a handsome salary; he can afford many luxuries.

　　4. He has a handsome salary therefore he can afford many luxuries.

　　5. He has a handsome salary, therefore he can afford many luxuries.

　　6. He has a handsome salary, therefore, he can afford many luxuries.

　　7. He has a handsome salary; therefore, he can afford many luxuries.

　　8. He has a handsome salary. Therefore, he can afford many luxuries.

　　正确的句子是？

　　正确句子为3、7、8，其他五个句子都是Run-on sentences

　　一、Sentences VS Run-on sentences

　　Run-ons是什么？

　　是错误的句子！是Sunny的所有学生（无论基础有多好）都会犯、易犯的错误。

　　两个出错点：

　　1.一个句子想表达很多意思；

　　2.标点符号使用错误。

　　二、第一个出错点解决----熟悉英语句子结构

　　语法知识点很琐碎，但我们不能迷失在琐碎中，只见树木不见森林。这也是中学语法教学普遍存在的一个问题：全、细，但是缺乏整体架构。

　　意识到这个问题，在接到托福预备课程的学生后，第一堂语法课老师们便会带领学生一起建构英语语法框架。有了大框架，走到哪都不怕。

　　语法框架见下图，基础核心记在心：

　　三、第二个出错点解决----正确认识英文标点符号

　　1.来看看霉霉的中英简介

　　（1）中文简介：泰勒·斯威夫特（1989年12月13日出生）是美国歌手兼词曲作者，她是世界领先的当代艺术家之一，她以记录个人生活的叙事歌曲闻名，这些歌曲获得媒体的广泛报道。

　　点评：中文一“逗”到底，没毛病。

　　（2）英文简介：Taylor Alison Swift （born December 13, 1989） is an American singer-songwriter, she is one of the world's leading contemporary recording artists, she is known for narrative songs about her personal life, the songs have received widespread media coverage.

　　点评：英文一“逗”到底？不扶老奶奶就服您叻！

　　Run-on sentences!

　　改正：向维基百科学习：

　　Taylor Alison Swift （born December 13, 1989） is an American singer-songwriter.? ① One of the world's leading contemporary recording artists,② she is known for narrative songs about her personal life, which③ have received widespread media coverage. （Wikipedia: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Taylor_Swift）

　　①适时断句（句号）

　　②处理为同位短语（One of the world's leading contemporary recording artists进一步解释说明she）

　　③处理为复合句（which指代songs）

　　2.两点务必明确

　　（1） 英文标点符号的使命务必明确：

　　（2） 单词词性务必明确：

　　therefore是副词（adverb）；不同于连词（conjunction），副词不可以连接两个独立句！否则就是Run-ons。（敲黑板！！！）

　　它们都是副词（adverb）：

　　（此表赶紧收藏，手慢无-----学他们说话）

　　词性的重要性很多孩子刚开始并不明白，choose和choice不分、educate和education想到哪个用哪个。面对一把把叉（?），这些学生往往收起纯真的微笑，露出一丝尴尬，开始认真思考将词性列入单词记忆的一部分。（词性！词性！词性！）

　　四、五招解决Run-ons

　　（1）一刀两断选句号

　　He has a handsome salary. He can afford many luxuries.

　　（2）藕断丝连选分号

　　He has a handsome salary; he can afford many luxuries.

　　He has a handsome salary; therefore, he can afford many luxuries.

　　（3）并列连词很优秀

　　He has a handsome salary, and he can afford many luxuries.

　　He has a handsome salary, so he can afford many luxuries.

　　（4）主从复合更优秀

　　He has such a handsome salary that he can afford many luxuries.

　　He who has a handsome salary can afford many luxuries.

　　（5）变身短语无敌了

　　With a handsome salary, he can afford many luxuries.

　　Earning/ Having a handsome salary, he can afford many luxuries.

　　As a high earner, he can afford many luxuries.

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