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　　第一篇

　　01

　　翻译1：很多人觉得自己有必要赶时尚。

　　错误的句子：Many people think that they are necessary to chaes after fashion.

　　错误：人没有necessary这么一说；chase在这里用作及物动词比较好。

　　正确的句子：Many people consider it necessary to follow fashion.

　　句子结构：主语（many people）+及物动词(consider)+形式宾语(it)+宾语补足语 (necessary)；真正的宾语是to follow fashion.

　　拓展的句子：Many people consider it necessary to follow fashion; otherwise, they believe they are behind the times.

　　中文翻译：很多人觉得有必要赶时尚；否则的话，他们相信自己过时了。

　　02

　　翻译2：人口老龄化促使国家去放松退休年龄的限制。

　　错误的句子：Compulsory retirement age will be abolished, and the reason is attributed to population aging and urban. human activities.

　　错误1：retirement age是可数名词

　　错误2：reason is attributed to 这个搭配不好

　　正确的句子：the ageing population has prompted countries to raise the statutory retirement age.

　　句子结构：主语(ageing population)+及物动词(prompt)+宾语(countries)+宾语补足语(to raise…)

　　拓展的句子：The ageing population leads to a shortage of skillful workers, a problem which has promote countries to raise the statutory retirement age.

　　错误：应该是skilled workers. Skillful表示人们做某事的时候所展示的技艺娴熟

　　正确的句子：The ageing population leads to a shortage of highly skilled workers, a problem which has prompted countries to raise the statutory retirement age.

　　注：a problem在这里是同位语，指代前面的shortage

　　中文翻译：人口老龄化导致高级技术工人的短缺，这个问题已经促使国家提高了法定退休年龄。

　　03

　　翻译 3：很多女孩都不愿意在男人居多的行业里（male-dominated world）找工作。错误的句子：A number of girls are not willing to hunting jobs in the male-dominated world

　　错误 1 willing to do something 固定搭配

　　错误 2 a number of 在这里感觉是在某个地方，有一些女孩不愿意做什么。

　　错误 3 定冠词不恰当，因为世界上男人居多的行业有很多，不可能特指

　　正确的句子：Many girls are not willing to seek employment in a male-dominated world.

　　句子结构：主语+系动词+表语(willing)

　　也可以用状语从句扩充：

　　Numerous women are unwilling to find employment in a male-dominated world because they can face barriers to top-level promotion.

　　中文翻译：很多女孩不愿意在男人为大多数的行业找工作，因为她们会面临在高职位升迁中的阻碍。

　　04

　　翻译4：电子汽车的发明是我们维护环境所做努力的其中一部分。

　　错误的句子：The invention of electric vehicles is a part of our efforts aiming at preserving the environment.

　　错误1：一般是“part of”

　　错误2：“effort to do something”更为通顺，在这里

　　正确的句子：The invention of electric vehicles is part of our effort to sustain the environment.

　　句子结构：主语（The invention of electric vehicles）+系动词（is）+表语（part ）; “of…”

　　全是定语拓展的句子：The invention of electric vehicles is part of our effort to sustain the environment, because electric vehicles do not conduct exhaust emission, compared with fossil fuel motors

　　错误1：electric vehicles重复

　　错误2：conduct exhaust emission搭配问题

　　错误3：fossil fuel motors用词不好，MOTOR是马达的意思。

　　正确的句子：The invention of electric vehicles is part of our effort to sustain the environment because these vehicles create less exhaust fumes than conventional cars.

　　中文翻译：电子汽车的发明是我们维护环境所做努力的其中一部分，因为这些汽车比传统汽车产生较少的废气。

　　05

　　翻译5：家长和老师应该努力去限定小孩看电视的时间。

　　错误的句子：parents and teachers should do their efforts to curb the time of watching TV on children.

　　错误1 make an effort to 固定表达

　　错误2 curb一般是抑制某种行为，而不是接time.

　　错误3 “watching TV on children”也不通。

　　正确的句子：parents and teachers should make an effort to limit children’s screen time.

　　句子结构：主语（parents and teachers）+及物动词(make)+宾语(effort)

　　拓展的句子：Parents and teachers should make an effort to limit children's screen time, thereby protecting children's eyesight and encourage them to do more out-door activities.

　　错误：protecting 和encourage不对称

　　正确的句子：Parents and teachers should make an effort to limit children's screen time, thereby protecting children's eyesight and encouraging them to do more outdoor activities.

　　（注：这句话的分词最好不要改成定语从句，因为前面不知道是修饰“screen time”还是“limit screen time”）

　　中文翻译：家长和老师应该努力去限定孩子看电视的时间，这样会保护孩子的视力，鼓励他们做户外运动。

　　06

　　翻译6：艺术不属于学校的主科。

　　错误的句子：Arts is not regarded as a core curriculum at school.

　　错误1 主谓不一致

　　错误2 curriculum是所有课程的总称

　　正确的句子：The arts are not among core subject areas at school.

　　句子结构：主语（The arts）+系动词（are）+表语（介词among+宾语充当表语）拓展的句子：The arts are not among core subject areas at school. However,we should learn them at school . Because they could add spice of our life.

　　错误1：because 是从属连词，要连接两个句子。

　　错误2：add spice to life 才是固定搭配

　　错误3：them有点指代不清楚.

　　正确的句子：The arts are not among core subject areas at school but deserve a place in the curriculum, for these subjects add spice to life.

　　中文翻译：虽然艺术不属于学校的主要课程，但是它们在课程大纲里拥有一席之地，因为这些科目能够给生活添色彩。

　　07

　　翻译7：非法捕杀导致某些动物的灭亡，生物多样性也会损失。

　　错误的句子：Hunting illegally leads to the extinct of species, as well as, biodiversity is deteriorated.

　　错误1：extinct是个形容词

　　错误2：as well as 后面一般加名词，动名词，或者是比较状语从句的分句，很少加完整的句子。

　　正确的句子：Illegal hunting leads to extinction of some species and the loss of biodiversity.

　　主语（Illegal hunting）+及物动词（leads to）+宾语（extinction）

　　08

　　翻译8：有时候，很难去评估人类行为的环境代价。

　　错误的句子：Sometimes, it is difficult to evaluate the environmental costs of people’s behaviors.

　　错误1：environmental cost在这里用单数就好，因为是在说整个影响，而不是不同的影响。

　　错误2：behaviour 英式拼写

　　错误3：behaviour在这里不用activities好，因为行为是指人的瞬间举动，activities一般是持续时间比较长。

　　正确的句子：Sometimes, it is difficult to evaluate the environmental cost

　　句子结构：主语(it)+ 系动词（is）+表语（difficult）；而“to evaluate the environmental cost of human activities”不定式充当形式主语。

　　拓展的句子：

　　Sometimes, although it is difficult to evaluate the environmental cost of human activities, there is a necessity for the government enacting legislations to restrict some behaviors , which can also arise people's concern about environmental degradation.

　　错误1：there is a necessity for 别扭

　　错误2：arise 不及物动词

　　错误3：状语从句后，再写那么长的定语从句就多余了

　　正确的句子：Sometimes, although it is difficult to evaluate the environmental cost of human activities, it is necessary to enact laws to restrict some behaviours.

　　中文翻译：有时候，虽然很难去评估人类行为的环境代价，但是应该颁布法律以限制这些行为。

　　9

　　翻译9因为不够明朗的经济前景（economic outlook），很多公司不可能招聘新的职员。

　　错误的句子： Because of unclear/ambiguous economic outlook, many companies are unlikely to recruit new employments.

　　错误1 ambiguous 一般不修饰OUTLOOK

　　错误2 应该是employees

　　正确的句子：

　　Because of the uncertainty about the economic outlook, many companies are unlikely to recruit new employees.

　　句子结构：主语+系动词+表语

　　Because of 是介词词组引导原因状语

　　拓展的句子：Because of the uncertainty about the economic outlook, many companies are unlikely to recruit new employers, so a considerable number of graduates will face the problem of unemployment.

　　错误：”because of”和“so” 一般避免连用

　　错误2：employees 雇员

　　正确的句子：Because of the uncertainty about the economic outlook, many companies are unlikely to recruit new employees and a considerable number of graduates fail to find employment.

　　中文翻译：因为经济前景的不确定，很多公司不可能招聘新人，因此大量的毕业生找不到工作。

　　10

　　翻译10 高层建筑有时候被认为是城市的eyesore。

　　错误的句子（4.5分）：Occasionally，high﹣rise buildings are tend to be regarded as the eyesore of a city.

　　错误1 Occasionally表示的意思是“偶尔地，很少地”

　　错误2 “be + do”永远是错的

　　正确的句子：High-rise buildings are sometimes regarded as eyesores of the city.

　　（注：这句话里如果说“the eyesore”就是特指，意思就是城市只有一处难看的地方，事实上未必如此。）

　　句子结构：“somebody regards something as something”是“主语+补足语”的结构。

　　而这句话是这个结构的被动语态。

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