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GMAT作文看了几万份,只有5%让人赏心悦目

作者:网编整理 来源:网络 发布时间:2019-06-11

  AWA本质上,并不需要你有特别花哨高超的英文功底,也不需要有非常深度成熟的思想,他其实需要我们自己阐述的地方非常少,我们基本唯一需要做的就是找出文中错误分析错误就可以了,并不像托福雅思作文那样,需要自己展开观点。因此,最关键的地方就在于,要快速找出短文中的逻辑错误,并且能够合理地进行分析。

  讲到如何快速识破逻辑漏洞,那不得不提起耳熟能详的七宗罪了。七宗罪虽然是个好东西,但是很多同学还是苦于记不全,这时候校花就忍不住献上个段子来助攻一下啦~

  记忆口诀:养姐泪饮二等茶

  养:样本不足(第一宗罪)

  姐:结论无据(第二宗罪)

  泪:错误类比(第三宗罪)

  饮:因果联系(第四宗罪)

  二:二者择一(第五宗罪)

  等:时地全等(第六宗罪)

  茶:可疑调查(第七宗罪)

  在这里给大家举一个有助于记忆的小故事,帮助大家记忆~

  一寒门子弟终得梦校录取,临行前,奉茶与拉扯自己长大的姐姐,姐姐落泪。因家中贫困,只得以二等茶叶冲泡,然,茶苦心甜。

  除了七宗罪打基础之外,还要依靠练习一些题目,OG例题可以帮助实现这个目标。OG范文的使用,既可以帮助你进行一定题目的练习,又可以让你看到这个题目应该如何写会比较好。如果有时间的话,当然是推荐可以上机多练习写一些范文中的题目。

  能够合理的进行分析,这一点看上去很难,其实很好实现。网上有无数的模板总结,但是不能光去背这些别人总结的东西,最好是要自己去读一读这些句子,筛选整合一下,让他们更适合自己的语言习惯,稍加修改,最后考试前基本就是背一背这个模板。

  01

  ▎建立对作文的初步感觉

  复习资料:对于AWA的解释,OG无疑是最官方的!

  复习时间:20分钟

  复习目的:

  看完OG之后要对以下几点心中有数。

  1)什么是AWA?

  2)AWA考察哪些能力?

  3)评分标准(文章是否结构清晰、论点鲜明、反驳是否理有据有逻辑、内容扣题又充实)

  4)6分和4分的作文读起来大概是怎样的感觉。

  02

  ▎了解作文基本框架

  复习资料:2-3篇满分范文

  复习时间:30分钟

  复习目的:

  需要彻底了解GMAT作文。

  1)一篇完整的AWA是啥样?

  2)满分的范文有什么特点?

  3)文章基本语言风格。

  4)可能攻击方向。

  03

  ▎开始实战演练

  复习资料:3-5道题

  复习时间:每道题30分钟

  复习目的:

  1)迅速读懂题目,拿出纸笔准备练习。

  2)找到攻击点。

  3)根据答案参考思路,强化没想到的攻击点。

  4)总结自己擅长的攻击模式。

  AWA常见模式:

  提出Problem,给出可能的Causes,给出Solution

  那么这一类就可以归为:

  Cause + Problem + Solution

  每次遇到这类题目,可能性思路是找以下三点:

  #1 Other cause

  #2 Other solution

  #3 Solution ≠ effective

  04

  ▎总结学习模板

  复习资料:3-5份模板

  复习时间:60分种

  复习目的:

  1)制作模板:记录好词好句,更改一些句型和词性,按照逻辑错误类型来建立模板。

  2)根据自己的行文风格、习惯来修改句型、词性。

  3)以精准、简练的语言说清楚。

  4)句型、词性多样化。

  05

  ▎背诵加强化练习

  复习资料:自创模板,OG或寂静

  复习时间:2小时

  复习目的:

  1)重复强化记忆,把重点部分标注不同颜色,方便记忆。

  2)背诵模板千万不能只是口头背,建议上机默写。

  3)按考试时间上机,多多练习作文。

  TIPS

  ▎AWA写作该注意些什么?

  #1 时间安排:3-4分钟解题,25分钟码字,1-2分钟检查。

  #2 字数安排:400字大概是20行左右(20字/行)

  #3 写作格式:每段顶格写,段间空一行

  #4 打字速度:实在太捉急的话。。。活用复制黏贴吧!

  #5 提高速度:练反应思考速度,打字速度

  #6 限时练习:把每个月的寂静拿来练

  #7 基础补充:复习无聊时多看时事新闻,它能增加你对案例的分析能力

  #8 考试环境:习惯传统键盘,手指打字速度跟上思考的速度

  #9 高分要点:语法正确,拼写无误,注重逻辑

  准备作文时间不用多,但一定要动脑用心,掌握几个常见又用得顺手的攻击方式,对于大部分题目都可以派上用场,同时强迫自己记住几个自己不容易想到但同样好用的攻击点。

  保证思路逻辑清楚的同时,避免不必要的语法拼写错误,适应限时的机考环境。如果以上都能很好做到的话,高分就等你收入囊中了。

  文章下方也为大家准备了7宗罪的原文,大家也可以多多参考借鉴。

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  附录:七宗罪全文

  第一宗罪:无因果联系

  The author commits a fallacy of causal oversimplification. The line of the reasoning is that because A occurred before B, the former event is responsible for the latter. (The author uses the positive correlation between A and B to establish causality. However, the fact that A coincides with B does not necessarily prove that A caused B.) But this is fallacious reasoning unless other possible causal explanations have been considered and ruled out. For example, perhaps C is the cause of these events or perhaps B is caused by D.

  第二宗罪 Insufficient-sample

  The evidence the author provides is insufficient to support the conclusion drawn from it. One example is logically unsounded to establish a general conclusion (The statistics from only a few recent years are not necessarily a good indicator of future trends), unless it can be shown that A1 is representative of all A. It is possible that.... In fact, in face of such limited evidence, the conclusion that B is completely unwarranted.

  第三宗罪: 错误类比 (based on a false analogy )<横向>

  The argument rests on the assumption that A is analogous to B in all respects. This assumption is weak, since although there are points of comparison between A and B, there is much dissimilarity as well. For example, A..., however, B.... Thus, it is likely much more difficult for B to do....

  第四宗罪 all things are equal<纵向>

  The author commits the fallacy of “all things are equal”. The fact that happened two years ago is not a sound evidence to draw a conclusion that.... The author assumes without justification that the background conditions have remained the same at different times or at different locations. However, it is not clear in this argument whether the current conditions at AA are the same as they used to be two years ago. Thus it is impossible to conclude that....

  第五宗罪 Either-Or choice

  The author assumes that AA and BB are mutually exclusive alternatives and there is no room for a middle ground. However, the author provides no reason for imposing an either-or choice. Common sense tells us that adjusting both AA and BB might produce better results.

  第六宗罪 survey is doubtful

  The poll cited by the author is too vague to be informative. The claim does not indicate who conducted the poll, who responded, or when, where and how the poll was conducted. (Lacking information about the number of people surveyed and the number of respondents, it is impossible to access the validity of the results. For example, if 200 persons were surveyed but only 2 responded, the conclusion that...would be highly suspect. Because the argument offers no evidence that would rule out this kind of interpretations,) Until these questions are answered, the results of the survey are worthless as evidence for the conclusion.

  第七宗罪 gratuitous assumption

  The author falsely depends on gratuitous assumption that.... However, no evidence is stated in the argument to support this assumption. In fact, this is not necessarily the case. For example, it is more likely that.... Therefore, this argument is unwarranted without ruling out such possibility.

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