家庭与朋友

　　写作话题

　　Which way do you think is the best for students to make new friends? A: Joining a sports team; B: Participating in community activities; C: Travelling.

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　　At present, it is widely believed, that students can make new friends in various ways. In fact, the best method to build friendship with each other has been a topic of public concern. Some people suggest that travelling is the best way to make friends with each other while others are in favor of participating in community activities. However, in my point of view, I prefer joining a sports team, which offers the most opportunities to individuals on making new friends.

　　Firstly, the chances provided by the sports team make the friendship between members easier to form. It is mainly because the training of the sports team usually has its regular schedule and the extensive agenda brings in many opportunities for members in the sports team to communicate, which leads to the relation between members prone to be turned into friendship. Taking Tom, one member I know in the basketball team of our school, as an example, he has made several close friends in his team. According to his feedback, the members in the team are demanded to take 14 hours of exercise every week, which is quite extensive for most members. During the break time of training, Tom and his team members find that they have many common interests, such as watching professional games like NBA, CBA, and so on. He told me that they are friends just like brothers now. Therefore, it can be ensured that the sports team will create numerous chances for its members to form strong friendships.

　　Secondly, the common goal the members share in the sport team can lead to stronger friendships within team members. The main reason is that the members can establish trust and tacit agreement during the process of achieving a common goal. Taking the basketball team where Tom plays as an example, their common goal is to win the state championship. Through multiple games to win the championship of 2012, the members achieved a better understanding about each other. In fact, every one learned many things about their team members’ merits and demerits, and even about their characters. Since knowing each other, they felt all members were trustful and even reached a tacit agreement about their members. In addition, the cooperation of them made their relationship tighter. When they finally won the championship, a sound friendship within each member has been formed. Consequently, the effect of a common goal in a sports team is undeniable and apparent and it indeed can be beneficial to lead to a strong friendship.

　　Admittedly, other methods to make friends might also be feasible. Taking part in community activities and travelling can make students’ social life more meaningful. However, considering the forming process of friendship, joining a sports team should be a more reasonable approach. Besides, community activities might be boring and travelling might cause some accidents.

　　In conclusion, I firmly insist on joining a sports team, rather than participating in community activities and travelling, is the best way for students to make new friends.

　　参考译文

　　目前，人们普遍认为，学生可以通过各种方式结交新朋友。事实上，彼此间建立友谊的最好方式一直是公众关心的一个话题。有些人认为，旅游是交友的最好途径，而有些人则赞成参与社区活动。然而，在我看来，我更喜欢加入一个运动队，这为个人结交新朋友提供了最好的机会。

　　首先，运动队所提供的机会使队员之间更容易形成友谊关系。这主要是因为，运动队的训练通常会有规律的时间表，而且全面的日程可以让队员之间有很多的交流机会，从而使得队员之间更倾向于产生友谊。以我认识的人汤姆为例，他是我们学校篮球队的一名队员，他在篮球队结交了一些关系密切的好友。根据他的反馈，篮球队的每名成员被要求每周至少要训练 14 个小时，这对于大多数队员而言都是相当长的时间。在训练的间隙，汤姆和他的队友发现，他们之间有许多共同的爱好，比如看 NBA（美国职业篮球联赛）、 CBA（中国男篮职业联赛）等职业比赛。他告诉我，他们现在情同手足。因此，可以确定的是，运动队会为队员创造很多让彼此建立稳固友谊的机会。

　　其次，在运动队中，队员们拥有共同的目标，这可以增进队员之间的友谊。这主要是因为，在为共同目标而奋斗的过程中，队员们可以建立信任和不言而喻的默契。以汤姆所在的篮球队为例，他们的共同目标就是夺取州冠军。为了赢得 2012 年总冠军，他们参加了多场比赛。在这一过程中，队员们对彼此有了更深的了解。事实上，每个人都了解很多队友的优缺点，甚至是彼此的个性。因为互相了解，他们觉得所有的队员都值得信任，甚至达成了一种默契。此外，相互之间的合作也让他们的关系变得更加亲密了。当他们最终赢得冠军时，每个成员都和其他人形成了坚固的友谊。因此，共同的目标在运动队中所起的作用是不可否认、显而易见的，它确实有益于建立坚固的友谊。

　　诚然，用其他的方式来交朋友也是可行的。参加社区活动和旅行可以让学生的社会生活变得更加有意义。但是，考虑到友谊的建立过程，加入一个运动队应该是比较合理的途径。此外，社区活动可能会很无聊，而旅行可能会引发意外。

　　总而言之，我坚信，相比参加社区活动和旅行，加入一个运动队是让学生结交新朋友的最佳方式。

　　范文点拨

　　这篇文章以经典的四要素开场。值得注意的是，铺垫的给定相对比较笼统。对于题目设定的话题，笔者的观点是：“加入一个运动队是让学生结交新朋友的最佳方式。”在具体的论证过程中，作者从两个角度展开论述，即“交流机会”和“共同目标”。在论述分论点时，文章细致参照了本书中介绍的论证方式，运用了本书所主张的论证方法。在让步段中，作者谈及了另外两种交友方式的特点和弊端所在。从一定程度上，作者也由此否定了另外两种交友方式。在结尾段中，作者对观点进行了重申。总之，本文以逻辑关系的细致性见长，语言难度不大，重点推荐打字速度较快、逻辑能力较强的考生仔细参考、学习。

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