Do you agree or disagree with following statement:

　　Students should spend some time doing part-time job before they study in university.

　　（问题：学生应不应该在上大学前做一些兼职工作？）

　　首先要解好题：题目问的是在上大学之前是否需要兼职。我们很容易想到在高中结束、大学开始之前找一些兼职工作可以对学生发展起到的正面作用，当然要写反面也可以，只是恐怕没有那么好找论据，而如果要写“模棱两可”的态度的话则更难处理了。

　　第二步是确定论据，很容易想到在上大学以前进行一些兼职工作能够为学生积累一些宝贵的经验，以及会想到现代学生普遍缺少自理能力，参加工作（兼职工作往往让人联想到低端服务行业的职位）恰好可以弥补这一不足。

　　确定论据以后就是丰富每一段的内容。这里用到的无非就是两种办法：论证或例证。论证切忌泛泛而谈，要举出细节。实在无法论证的时候才可以使用例证。

　　Most university freshmen will have to go through a period of difficult time during their first days in college, because they are not fully prepared for the new life in the new environment. Therefore, people suggest that it would be better for them to do some work, such as part-time job, before attending college, which, in my opinion, is actually a perfect idea（表明立场）, for it will definitely help the students better prepared for their university life.

　　（本段论点：获取宝贵的经验）

　　First, part-time job is a good opportunity for students to obtain precious experience. For one thing, when they are working, they will have to get along with more people in a more complicated environment. Before they graduate from high school, they have always been living a relatively simple world with only parents, classmates and teachers; they don’t need to know how to understand the art of interpersonal relationship. However, a job requires more sophisticated ability of communication, which is also needed in the university, a place to some extent nearly the same complicated as society.（能在工作中学到处理人际关系的技巧） For another, some work experience before college makes students comprehend things that they can do and a lot more that they cannot; therefore, their future study could be guided with a clearer target. And when they graduate from the university with more confidence to hunt jobs four years later, they will be grateful for the time they spend doing the preparation in advance.（对日后找工作有帮助）

　　词汇：

　　obtain：获得

　　sophisticated：老练的

　　to some extent：某种程度上

　　comprehend：理解

　　（本段论点：锻炼独立生活的能力、获得收入）

　　Meanwhile, the working experience before university can bring extra benefits in life. As we know, most students today are totally ignorant about how to live their life independently, because parents take care of even the most trivial things for them all the years. Once they begin to work, they might need to deal with things they have never done before, which, however, are things they really need to start doing as soon as possible. This will help them to behave like adults. Besides, even the simplest work can offer them a salary, and for the students from not wealthy families, the salary can well share the economic burden of parents to some extent. Some students can even support their study and life over the four years by keeping doing part time jobs.

　　词汇：

　　benefit：好处

　　ignorant：无知的

　　trivial：琐碎的

　　Admittedly, over engaging in part time jobs might distract students from their study.（让步，不必太长） However, the ability of time management is also an important thing they will need to learn for the future university life, and the benefits they will get from doing so cannot be ignored. All in all, doing some work before entering college is indeed something worth trying for all college candidates.

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