题目

　　Which one do you prefer?

　　1) A company offering you a job with challenging and interesting projects but less vacation days.

　　2) A company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but more vacation days.

　　你要选哪个呢？一个有意思，但没几天假期的工作，还是说一个没意思，但是假期很长的工作。

　　思路

　　虽然一个有趣，有假期，而且高新的工作时人人都追求的，但是现实往往是“鱼与熊掌不可得兼”。根据问题，我们只能选择“好工作”或者“长假期”。小英觉得呢，找到一份自己能enjoy的工作才是最重要的。毕竟，我们花绝大部分的时间都出于工作里面，而vacation只能起到一个辅助作用。所以，怎么能本末倒置呢？

　　框架

　　讲理（揪理）型，绝大部分情况下讨论利于我方的观点，只在一小段讨论对方的观点，并及时反驳，所以看上去是在跟你讲道理（然并卵）。

　　介绍段

　　1. 用题外内容引出问题，或对题目进行释义

　　2. 回答问题，阐述观点

　　主体段#1

　　1. 表达我方的观点

　　2. 举例支持观点（具体证据，亲生经历，假设情况等）

　　3. 对例子进行解释（跟观点的联系？有什么重要性？）

　　4. 若感觉字数不够，重复2，3步骤

　　主体段#2

　　1. 表达我一方的观点

　　2. 举例支持我方观点（同上）

　　3. 对例子进行解释（同上）

　　4. 若感觉字数不够，重复2，3步骤

　　主体段#3

　　1. 表达对方的观点（较弱一点的观点，可以很轻松反驳的那种）

　　2. 举例支持对方观点（同上）

　　3. 立刻结合例子反驳该观点

　　4. 若感觉字数不够，重复2，3步骤

　　总结段

　　1. 总结各个主体段的观点

　　2. 延伸话题并结尾

　　范文+解析

　　Ideally, I wish for my job to be challenging, interesting and also have lots of vacation days. The reality however is often harsh. If I am given a choice between an interesting joband a job with plenty of days off, I will choose the prior, as I believe an interesting job is more important than having more holidays.

　　题外话：虽然我理想中的工作鱼与熊掌得兼，但现实通常很残酷

　　文章中心：如果给我选择，我会选择一个有趣，有挑战性的工作

　　Having a challenging job can be very rewarding.To give an example, my cousin had being interested in the designing industry since high school. Currently, she is working as a landscape architecture which her job is to design local residential areas for investors. Although it is a very tense job, and there are almost no vacations at all, she feels fulfilled because she is able to accomplish things that she is interested in, not mentioning the high salaries she receives from all that hard work.

　　论点：有一个具有挑战性的工作会令人有成就感

　　证据：我表姐就有一份很有挑战性，符合她兴趣的工作

　　解释：虽然很累，但是她会觉得很有意思，很有成就感

　　Furthermore, having an interesting job is also an express toward a good career. In our competitive world today, people are often required to strive for the better in order to prevent themselves from being outcompeted by others. In this sense, having a boring job can prevent an individual from working hard intrinsically. For me, the cost of having long vacations may involve sacrificing that person’s future career. Thus in my opinion, I rather exchange my vacation days for a better and more interesting job as it is the best incentive for working hard for my future.

　　论点：一个有意思的工作会帮助你成就事业

　　证据：在现代竞争强烈的社会里，一个自己不感兴趣的工作会阻碍你去发自内心努力工作

　　解释：长久的假期会影响自己的工作动力

　　It is easier to be said than done in situations listed above.On the one hand, people know that working hard is essential for success in life. On the other hand, individuals are often stressed at work. Under such circumstances, vacation life becomes more appealing to them than they supposed to be. However, I think that vacation should not be the sole instrument for eliminating stress. I believe even in a work place, people should find ways to relax, such as taking a water break between presentations, or chat with co-workers during lunch hours. Such is why I believe it is still possible to work hard without having too much stress.

　　论点：以上的东西，说起来比做起来容易

　　证据：一方面，人们知道要努力工作，而另一方面却想通过放假来减压

　　解释：（反驳）放假并非降压的唯一途径，而生活中往往都有各种降低压力的方式

　　Overall, although I believe there are people who want to have more vacations for stress related reasons, I feel that in the long term, having an interesting and challenging job is better because it is most beneficial for one’s career and his or herown sense of well-being. Generally, I think it is important for people to balance their work life and their personal life, no matter how interesting or how boring the work will be.

　　总结：虽然有些人会想多一些假期，但我认为拥有一个有趣的，有挑战性的工作是对长远发展来说有利的

　　延伸：人们应该去平衡自己的工作生活与自己的私生活，无论工作有没有趣

　　重点词汇

　　harsh(adj.) 残酷的

　　residential (adj.) 居住性的

　　strive for the better努力向上

　　incentive (n.) 激励

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