Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:

　　The time that children under 13 have access to electronic devices that can be connected to the internet, like computers, phones and ipads, should be limited to one hour or less.

　　Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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　　总观点：agree

　　让步段：It is not to say that electronic devices could not benefit children at all. In fact, 学生可以通过上网expand their knowledge。比如，如果他们对于planets 有很多疑问，just type some keywords into the search engine and press the enter button, various explanations, illustrations, pictures could display on the screen.但是，他们还有很多获取知识的方式，比如问老师和父母，去图书馆查资料，或者快速浏览网页，真的不需要花大量时间在电子设备上。

　　分论点一：First, excessive use of electronic devices can be detrimental to their health.

　　13岁以下的孩子还在长身体的关键时期in their formative years，老是盯着电脑屏幕，很容易让眼睛疲劳，眼花，甚至近视be susceptible to eye strain, blurriness, and even myopia。

　　另一方面，不限制使用时间，他们会习惯于久坐的生活方式a sedentary lifestyle，which is linked to diseases like obesity, backache, and dizziness.

　　分论点二：Second, without a time limit, children can be addicted easily.

　　13岁以下的孩子缺乏自制力are lacking in self-control.如果能自由使用have free access to iPad, mobile phones or laptops, 就能接触到电子游戏 with smartly designed plots，有意思的App，各种八卦的social media, all of which could tie an addicted youngster to a chair day and night.

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