The university will spend money on the dormitory to improve the life quality of students. Which of the following do you think is the best way?
1) Providing a room for quiet study
2) Building an exercise room
3) Providing entertainment place (watch film)
参考思路大纲
审题要点:university, dormitory, life quality
总观点:Building an exercise room is the best choice.
分论点1:First, an exercise room inside the dormitory helps students work out in a safe and convenient way.
大家通常下课后或者完成任务后去锻炼。可能已经late at night,校内gym关门了,去校外就要冒着被陌生人跟踪或者被抢劫的风险run the risk of being followed by strangers or being robbed.另外,天气可能太冷,或者太热,或者有一些extreme weather conditions such as typhoon strikes and rainstorm, 出宿舍也不方便。
分论点2: Second, an exercise room inside the dormitory could help students expand their social circle.
就算大家住在同一栋楼,也可能不认识,并且也没有什么理由让彼此打开话题 there’s no reason for them to talk to each other. 如果能在一起锻炼,他们就可以边ride stationary bikes,边讨论瘦身计划diet plan。边do yoga,边吐槽教授的作业要求太严complain the demanding papers from their professors. 有了更多的common topics, it is easier to make more friends.
让步段:1和3也挺好,但是学生回到宿舍不用1,用3的话又太吵闹。
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