Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:

　　Nowadays, children rely too much on technology, like computers, smartphones, video games, for fun and entertainment; Playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children's development.

　　Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

　　参考思路大纲

　　总观点：agree

　　让步段（可以挪用3.30号，这段子太好用，背下来）：It is not to say that electronic devices could not benefit children at all. In fact, 学生可以通过上网expand their knowledge。比如，如果他们对于planets 有很多疑问，just type some keywords in the search engine and press the enter button, various explanations, illustrations, pictures could display on the screen. 但是……

　　分论点一：First, playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends could contribute to one’s physical development.

　　孩子还处在长身体关键时期，一些简单的玩具，比如骑自行车，堆积木，riding bicycles and stacking blocks，需要他们move their hands and legs actively。另外，如果能和朋友一起play hide and seek, play soccer,他们需要跑，需要跳，这些运动有助于强身健体build up a strong body。

　　相比之下，老玩电子产品，他们会习惯于久坐的生活方式a sedentary lifestyle，which is linked to diseases like obesity, backache, and dizziness.

　　分论点二：Second, it could be conducive to children’s mental development.

　　孩子还处在心理成长的形成时期，这时候多见见朋友，多跟朋友互动benefit mental health。他们能在朋友肯定的眼神中意识到鼓励的重要性，能在说服朋友遵守游戏规则的时候学会清晰表达自己的观点，能在从观察朋友的面部表情中学会同情和理解他人。They could realize the importance of encouragement from the confirming eyes of their friends; they can become more articulate in expressing a wide range of ideas through persuading friends to obey game rules; they can learn to sympathize and understand others from paying attention to friends’ facial expressions.

　　相比之下，如果孩子沉迷在电子的虚拟世界中be obsessed in the electronic virtual world，很有可能变得自闭，抑郁，fall prey to autism or depression，有些孩子也会因为模仿游戏中的行为而变得暴力。

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