雅思写作Task1柱状图考官范文(12)
The graphs below show the Expenditure on Heath & Education, UAE as percentage of GDP and Infant mortality and life expectancy.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
Sample Answer:
The given graphs gives data on the percentage of GDP spent on health and education sectors in UAE from 1985 to 1993 and also shows the infant mortality and life expectancy of this country from 1970 to 1992.
As is observed from the first bar graph, UAE spent around 8% on health care and 10% on education of their GDP. After 5 years the expenditure on health decreased slightly while the expenditure on education increased by 4%. Finally in 1993, the percentages spent on both sectors increased and reached to 10% of GDP for health care and over 14% on education. This indicated the increased expenditure on both sector by the UAE government.
According to the second graph, life expectancy in UAE was 60 years initially in 1970 while the infant mortality rate was 70 per thousand. After 22 years, both of these situations improved and the life expectancy of UAE people increased to 71 years while the infant mortality rate decreased to only 20 per thousand.
In conclusion, UAE budget for health and education sector increased over the period and as a result the infant mortality rate has decreased and the life expectancy improved.
(Approximately 195 words)
(This model answer can be followed as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches.)
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