雅思写作Task1柱状图考官范文(49)
The chart below shows the number of men and women (in thousand) in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Sample Answer:
The given bar graphs shows data on the British people's fulltime and part-time further education from 1970 to 1991. As is presented in the graph, more men and women were studying fulltime than part-time for the given period.
Initially in 1970 and 1971, about 1000 thousand male were in fulltime further education and this number decreased to average 850 thousands for 1980 and 1990. On the contrary, this number for part-time students increased over the time though the number was many times lower than the number of people in full-time education. In 1970, almost 100 thousand people were in part-time education and in next 20 years this number increased to 200 thousand. On the other hand in 1970, the total number of female who were engaged in full time education was 700 thousand and this number increased over time and reached to 11000 thousand in 1990/91 which was even higher than the number of male who were in full-time further education in this year. The female part-time students' number also increased over time and reached to over 200 thousand in 1990 from the initial number of 20 thousand in 1970.
In summary, female made progress over male in terms of their involvement in full-time and part-time education in Britain for the given period.
(Approximately 213 words )
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