雅思写作高分范文：国际旅游利弊

　　本命题中含有两个分论点：A紧张； B否理解

　　考生可以持有的观点：

　　1. A + B非

　　2. A + B

　　3. A非 + B

　　4. A非 + B非

　　针对部分观点分析，构成四段作文，中间主体分成A和B两个段落。

　　关于tensions 分析

　　l 环境—交通(飞机，火车，汽车，土地，)

　　l 经济—原有原始的经济，农业为主，

　　l 政治：危机

　　l 文化——中国CBA

　　另外一种划分方式是：

　　l 物质紧张

　　l 精神紧张

　　写作三层次：论点 + 论证 + 论据

　　国际旅游的确引起了很多方面的紧张。首先，在环境上，由于汽车，飞机，等交通工具的使用增加，生态平衡被破坏，物种多样性降低。其次，它对当地的原始经济模式产生无法避免的冲击。中国的九寨沟就是一个例子，这个地方由于国际旅游的冲击，原始的农业经济正在变迁为旅游为主的经济模式。

　　International tourism does trigger tensions in a diverse array of fields. To begin with, the increase in the use of such traffic means as airplanes, trains, buses, and the like weakens the fragile balance (equilibrium) in an ecosystem. It also ruins the biodiversity in the ecosystem. Next, tensions in economic development are also conspicuous. The primitive economic pattern is inevitably vulnerable to the influences from the tourists who come from different economic systems. Jiuzhaigou, Sichuan, China is a typical case in point, where the local economic pattern has been shifting from the agriculture to tourism.

　　Despite the tensions, international tourism contributes to the understanding between people from different cultures, religions, races, and political ideas. This is because the tourism per se is more than appreciating the beautiful, brilliant natural landscapes, cultural traditions, or interesting customs. It is a kind of contacts. To contact is to communicate. Communication naturally promotes understandings. For instance, the Americans who traveled to Tibet tend to understand why Chinese governments insist that Tibet be a part of the Chinese territory and it should never be separated from the Chinese sovereignty. In fact, religious understanding serves as another telling example. The Christians who visit an Islamic attraction are more easily to accept that different religious should be able to coexist.

　　To sum up, the international tourism helps people understand each other although it has caused some tensions.

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