雅思写作议论文写作技巧讲解（5）

　　八面玲珑拓展法写作实例

　　4、Moral/crime

　　我认为政府应该对互联网实施新闻审查，因为网上有不少暴力色情内容，对青少年的身心健康带来负面影响。

　　I think that the government should impose censorship on theInternet, which contains much violence and pornography and can exert adverseeffects on teenagers' physical and mental health.

　　青少年不够成熟，好奇心强，很难明辨是非，容易误入歧途。

　　A：Teenagersare so immature and curious that they can not differentiate virtue from eviland go astray. As the proverb goes: Curiosity kills the cat.

　　B：Due to theimmaturity and curiosity, it is hard for teenagers to distinguish right fromwrong and they can go astray easily. As the proverb goes: Curiosity kills thecat.

　　青少年比较盲从，经常模仿他们偶像的行为，而有些偶像却是负面榜样。

　　?Teenagersare quite sequacious and they often emulate the behaviour of their idols whoare sometimes negative role models.

　　?Teenagersare quite sequacious, so they often emulate the behaviour of their idols, butunfortunately some of them are negative role models.

　　政府应该限制广告，因为某些广告夸大其词，误导人，里面充满了花言巧语和陷阱。

　　?Thegovernment should restrict advertisements, because some advertisements areexaggerative, misleading and full of flowery words and traps.

　　?Someadvertisements, which are exaggerative, misleading and full of flowery wordsand traps, should be restricted.

　　成千上万的年轻人在大城市生活的诱惑下，离开家乡。

　　Hundreds of thousands of youth leave home under the lures of thelife of big cities.

　　一些青少年并不知道时尚是什么，他们只是盲目跟风。

　　Some teenagers actually know nothing about fashion. They areonly following others like sheep.

　　无可争辩，现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生活。政府对他们的漠视，简直就是犯罪。

　　?It isindisputable that there are millions of people who still lead a miserable lifeand have to face starvation and exposure. If the government pays no attentionto them, it can be called a kind of crime.

　　?It isindisputable that millions of people are still leading a miserable life withoutfood and shelter. If the government ignores them, it can be called a kind ofcrime.

　　写作练习

　　题目：Somepeople say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Otherpeople say that computers have made life more complex and stressful.

　　What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples tosupport your answer.

　　多层次分析例文：

　　计算机出现是必然的，它有好的方面，也有坏的方面+ 我们对待它的态度。(人类文明层次)

　　It isthe inevitable/irresistible mark of a developing society and an advancing humancivilization. All we can do is simply to accept it and try our best to maximizethe strengths and minimize the weaknesses, while always keeping abreast ofdeveloping trends. Only in this way, can we develop and prosper in step with anever-changing society.

　　计算机的出现带来了利弊+ 政府的作用 + 举例，如邓小平提出计算机要从娃娃抓起。(社会、政府层次)

　　Computershave been bringing us merits and demerits and play an increasingly significantrole in our social life.

　　Thegovernment, the organizer and administrator of the society, should supervisethis magic tool so as to make it serve for the people better.

　　Forexample, Deng Xiaoping, who is the trailblazer ( forerunner, pioneer, founder )of China's successful reform and opening-up, once advocated that the educationof computers should be started from childhood.

　　Currentlywith the increase of computer crimes, police are taking serious measures tofight against these crimes internationally.

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