雅思G类大作文8分范文

　　雅思G类大作文8分范文今天为大家分享一下。希望同学们借助这一文章能够对G类写作高分文章有一个整体了解，对比和自己作文的不足，找出缺点和问题，快速提高雅思写作水平。下面是分享来自雅思官网的雅思G类8分范文。

　　题目要求：You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

　　Shopping is becoming more and more popular as a leisure activity.However, some people feel that this has both positive and negative effects.

　　Why is shopping so popular? What effects does its increase in popularity have on individuals and on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

　　评分：Band 8

　　All parts of the task are sufficiently and appropriately addressed. A clear position is presented and supported and ideas are relevant and well-developed. Some further extension in supporting points, such as some mention of negative effects, however brief, could be added to raise this to the highest band for Task Response. There is a clear progression throughout the response and a wide range of cohesive devices is used with flexibility, although there is evidence of rare errors too. However, the personal comment in the final paragraph is a sudden topic shift after the general exploration of the issues. This is a slight lapse in the development and clear progression of the response, and prevents it from reaching the highest band for Coherence and Cohesion. A wide range of vocabulary is used with flexibility and precision. The occasional minor error, such as the omission of dependent prepositions, is evident but not systematic. Similarly, minor errors or omissions occur in structures, but this does not detract from the wide range flexibly and accurately used in general; the majority of structures are error-free.

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