一、话题
Describe something lost by others but found by you. You should say:
When it happened;
What you picked up;
How you did with the lost thing;
And how you felt about it.
二、话题分析
1) 这道题是一个事物类话题,是本季的新话题卡。
2) 今天要更新滴题卡是“捡到别人丢失的东西”,拾金不昧是个好品质呀,不知道大家在见到别人丢失的东西的时候有没有找到失主呢?如果找到了自然皆大欢喜,如果没有的话你又是怎么处理的呢?
3) 题目分解,第一个问题 “When it happened;+ What you picked up;;”,即“事物介绍”,简要说明自己是在什么时候捡到了什么物品。
4) 接下来,“How you did with the lost thing;;”,即“如何处理”,说明自己是如何处理这个物品的,最后有没有找到失主呢。
5) 最后一个问题“And how you felt about it”,即“个人感受”,这个事情给你留下了怎样的印象,你又有怎样的体会呢。
6) 今天Joy分享捡到别人丢失的东西,一次是纸币,一次是一部iPhone。
三、高分范例
I'd like to talk about the time when I found the school ID card lost by my classmate. It happened last semester. That day I planned to make a revision of calculus so I went to the library. I chose a seat and as soon as I sat down at the table, I found that there was a student ID card left on the desk. I looked around again to confirm that this seat had not been taken by others and then picked up the card. School ID card is really important for everyone as without it, you will not be able to enter the library, canteen or dorm. In this case, the person who lost it must have been very upset.
Luckily, basic information of the student was recorded on the card, so it was easy to know who owner the owner. I took a photo of the card and then posted it on the forum of my university attached with my phone number. The post was soon reposted by hundreds of other students and after about half an hour, the owner contacted me. At last, the card was back to her successfully.
As for how I felt about this experience, well first of all I was quite delighted. The owner was so excited when receiving the card. You know the feeling of helping others and seeing smile appearing on his or her face is really beyond description. What's more, I found out that life nowadays is far more convenient than before thanks to the modern technology. It was because of the internet and social communication applications that the information could be spread so fast and widely.
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