雅思写作必看“套路”！5.5到7全靠这几招

　　国庆七天过的真的是太太太快了

　　回顾这几天出门玩

　　总结起来完全就是

　　祖国的壮美山河完全让我无心上班

　　不过这次的国庆旅游

　　真的是让我长了很多见识

　　在别人看到黄昏下南飞的大雁的时候发出了

　　落霞与孤鹜齐飞 秋水共长天一色

　　然而我只能大喊

　　woc快看快看那么大个鸟

　　回想出去玩的这几天

　　我真的是把人类的本质发挥到了极致

　　遇到啥永远都只有一句woc

　　我相信很多烤鸭都有过一样的经历。很多考生在写文章的时候也经常用这样的语句彰显人类复读机的本质。比如之前很多学生在写作中常出现的，令人头大而大家又意外地用着很顺手的“模版”：

　　It is very importantfor the government to alleviate poverty (扶贫) as this isreally useful. This will bring many advantages to the country, so it is very necessary. In many cases, the benefits brought by this can be seen everywhere, and people will think that it is really good to live in such a good country.

　　考官看完的心路历程：Wait, 我是不是刚才改了一个复读机的卷子？

　　这段话一共60个词，但反反复复就强调了一个意思：这事儿超重要。

　　这位考生你莫不是给考官念了一段洗脑经？

　　不用说，这段文字出现在雅思写作卷子上，是拿不到高分的。那么我们怎么能摆脱“复读机”的本质，在雅思写作考试中拿个高分呢？

　　方法一：换同义词

　　这是最简单粗暴的方法，考官也喜欢花里胡哨的词汇，同义词越多，文章就能越漂亮。这段文字中出现的表示“褒贬”的词汇是在雅思写作中十分常见的，建议我们每类至少记三个。

　　好

　　[adj.] advantageous, beneficial, profitable, worthwhile, rewarding, expedient, conducive

　　[n.] advantage(s), benefit(s), strength(s), merit(s), bright side(s), virtue(s)

　　有助

　　[v.] benefit, contribute to, aid to, be conducive to

　　重要

　　[adj.] important, necessary, significant, essential, vital, crucial, principal, noteworthy, imperative, substantial

　　促进

　　[v.] enhance, promote, facilitate, foster, optimize, stimulate, boost, cultivate, accelerate

　　获得

　　[v.] accomplish, achieve, complete, finish, fulfill

　　支持

　　[v.] favor, be for, approve of, side with, stand on the side of, consent to, vote for

　　坏

　　[adj.] disadvantageous, harmful, adverse, problematic, detrimental, prejudicial

　　[n.] disadvantage(s), drawback(s), weakness(es), demerit(s), downside(s), shortcoming(s)

　　阻碍/破坏

　　[v.] damage, impair, spoil, endanger, undermine, hinder, hamper, obstruct, deteriorate, aggravate, jeopardize, eradicate

　　导致(多为贬)

　　[v.] cause, result in, lead to, trigger, give rise to, bring about, contribute to, generate

　　方法二：换词性

　　假如我们词汇量不够大，或因备考时间太短没办法短期内背这么多单词，这种方法其实是比较事半功倍的一种技巧，能有效用上我们背过的仅有单词，只需要把词性一换，又摇身变成另一个词。

　　举个栗子：

　　It is very important [adj.] for the government to alleviate poverty as this is really useful [adj.].

　　= It is of (considerable) importance [n.] for the government to alleviate poverty as this is of (markable) use [n.].

　　常见英语词性间的互相转化规律有：

　　动变名：

　　+ment / +tion / +ance / +ing

　　e.g.

　　achieve – achievement

　　suggest – suggestion

　　perform – performance

　　train – training

　　名变形：

　　+y / +ed / +ful / +less / +able / +ous / -t / +al / +ly

　　e.g.

　　guilt – guilty

　　balance – balanced

　　help – helpful / helpless

　　comfort – comfortable

　　advantage – advantageous

　　significance – significant

　　person – personal

　　live – lively (活跃的)

　　形变副：

　　+ly

　　e.g. in particular [adj.] = particularly [adv.]

　　不同词性使用时可能放在不同的词组、句式里，每种词性的具体用法，同学们平时可以多查词典的例句或详解来正确把握。如：

　　Top students may not be easily satisfied with their academic achievements [n.].

　　= Top students may not be easily satisfied with the goals of study that they have achieved [v.].

　　这样我们就会发现，背一个词能顶两个用，有时同一个词的词性变化甚至比我们背过它的同义词都多。我们还可以再去背一些表示“巨大的、显著的”这类含义的词汇，能让这样的表达更加丰富多样。

　　另外，这个方法在小作文里也相当好使。比如：

　　The percentage of second language speakers surged [v.] from 25% to 61%.

　　= The percentage of second language speakers experienced a (noticeable) surge [n.] from 25% to 61%.

　　= The percentage of second language speakers showed a surging [adj.] trend from 25% to 61%.

　　方法三：扩展内容

　　很多老师在课上说得最多的就是如何从多角度去扩展一个论点，加上适当的解释和例子，让考官感觉你的文章就是男人的衣柜某澜之家，每次都有新发现，句句都有新体验。

　　常见的扩展方法包括但不仅限于：

　　因果扩展

　　举例扩展

　　反向扩展

　　拿开头那段文字举例，不难发现每句话只是在反复强调扶贫的重要性，但并没有详细说明：为什么要扶贫？扶贫有哪些具体的效果？如果不扶贫会有什么后果？

　　仔细思考如上问题后，我们可以将它扩展成言之（那可以说是十分）有物的片段了：

　　It is of considerable importance for the government to alleviate poverty as the wealth gap may be narrowed to a large extent. One of the most noticeable merits of this is that social stability can be significantly guaranteed.Only under such circumstance could the economy make constant progress. If the poor are not financially supported by the government, they might consider themselves vulnerable, be unwilling to contribute to the advance of the country, or even hinder the growth.

　　这样一来，文章词汇也丰富了，内容更是充实了许多。

　　同学们可以试着用以上三种方法自己来修改下面这个片段：

　　Generation gap (代沟) is a big problem which happens between parents and children.It is normal that children will have different thoughts with their parents (why?), but this may be bad for both children and their parents. Many serious problems (what problems?) may occur when there is a gap between the two generations. (consequences?)

　　把以上三个方法综合应用，就能最大程度满足雅思大作文【思路】和【语言】两方面的考察要求，考官也会更青睐这样的文章。

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